Monday, April 25, 2005
I Believe You
Very nice story. Broke some tears on it even though most of the story was predictable (bar a twist or two)
Sad thing about the story is, just when I get really into the story, I get tripped by a grammatical error >.<; Once that's fixed, I feel this is publishable material.
Oh yeah, I didn't appreciate the use of celebrity names, cos I was getting all sad and stuff like that, then suddenly..... Jacky Wu Zhong Xian..... I dun know whether to laugh or cry leh.....
Still ...... Good Job!
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Very nice story. Broke some tears on it even though most of the story was predictable (bar a twist or two)
Sad thing about the story is, just when I get really into the story, I get tripped by a grammatical error >.<; Once that's fixed, I feel this is publishable material.
Oh yeah, I didn't appreciate the use of celebrity names, cos I was getting all sad and stuff like that, then suddenly..... Jacky Wu Zhong Xian..... I dun know whether to laugh or cry leh.....
Still ...... Good Job!
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